Some people, don't deserve.... - A poem/ song by me.. ;) [Archive]

cyclone2k

02-08-2009, 04:02 AM

Okay, with few things happening in my life, I have become a poet/ song-writer now -

Please post on some comments, as criticism/ appreciation/ suggestion, considering I just started writing poems/ songs.. ;)
Just in case you find this exceptionally good, and if you are an artist, and wish to use it for you/ your band, feel free to do it, but do send me the composition and please acknowledge me... :) and if possible, some money too, if you are earning something out of it.. ;)

Some people....
don't deserve...

the love and concern
you give to them...

they are better left..
the way they are..

coz, they don't understand..
what feelings are..
how it feels like when you stand
lonely with a broken heart bleeding in your hand...

they don't let you explain..
all your efforts go in vain..
you can't even cry.. standin' still.. hopin'..
they'll come back, hug you and feel your pain..

but, nothing happens..
you stand and continue to stand..
lonely with a broken heart bleeding in your hand..

better let them f#*k off..
move on in life and don't stop..

the best in life's yet to come..
there will be someone who'll make you feel home..

move on son... this is not the end coz,

Some people....
don't deserve...

the love and concern
you give to them...

Comments??

Deanis

02-08-2009, 12:28 PM

This is good mate, thats how things are and how things will always go.

cyclone2k

02-08-2009, 02:31 PM

Thanks for reading it mate ^^.. I have written a few more poems/ songs, which I will like to share, if you continue being diplomatic.. ;)

Deanis

02-08-2009, 07:54 PM

Share away its your board :p.
I will read them and give thoughts.

cyclone2k

02-09-2009, 01:10 AM

Nah... here people can have atleast freedom or listening/ reading.. ;) I'm not a fascist! ;)

I'll post 'em up soon.. :) Thanks for the heads-up!

James

02-10-2009, 12:04 AM

Awesome! I love it...

Great song!

Especially these lines:

"they don't let you explain..
all your efforts go in vain..
you can't even cry.. standin' still.. hopin'..
they'll come back, hug you and feel your pain.."

Wouldn't it be great to sing this song, with this theme:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VLEsgP0FMQ4&feature=related

cyclone2k

02-10-2009, 02:05 AM

James

02-10-2009, 12:50 PM

That's highly motivating pal ^^^..

Thanks to the lady and rap battles with ya ^^..
I am the next big writer,
you betta' watcha'! ;)

I can try asking an old pal of mine, who is into singing non-sense (rap) lately.. to sing it..

And, are you serious about that vid? or, have some pun intended??

You're welcome...

Hmmm....The next best writer? I consider THAT a compliment! Thank you.

No, I was serious about that video...

What does "Hari Ramm" mean?

cyclone2k

02-11-2009, 03:41 AM

Hmmm....The next best writer? I consider THAT a compliment! Thank you.
HAHA.. poor old man.. I wasn't talking about you.. lol.

No, I was serious about that video...

What does "Hari Ramm" mean?
Ohh..

Hare Raam is the chant related to Hinduism, the religion..

Raam/ Ram/ Raama (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rama) is the name of a Hindu God, incarnation of Lord Vishnu (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vishnu), also known as Hari. Hare (Hindi language word) is derived from the word Haran, which means - to take way or to end. Hare/ Hari can

Hare Raam, means - O Rama, take our pains, sins, etc. away..
or, simply chant of Hari and Rama..

Links worth a visit -
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hari
http://www.meditationiseasy.com/mCorner/techniques/Hare_Krishna_Mantra.htm
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hare_Krishna
http://sawaal.ibibo.com/puja-and-rituals/what-meaning-hare-krishnahare-krishna-krishna-krishna-hare-hare-210996.html

James

02-11-2009, 04:08 PM

HAHA.. poor old man.. I wasn't talking about you.. lol.

You said NEXT best writer, which probably means that I'm the BEST writer at the moment and by the time you reach my level, we'll be in 2012! :D

Ohh..

Hare Raam is the chant related to Hinduism, the religion..

Raam/ Ram/ Raama (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rama) is the name of a Hindu God, incarnation of Lord Vishnu (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vishnu), also known as Hari. Hare (Hindi language word) is derived from the word Haran, which means - to take way or to end. Hare/ Hari can

Hare Raam, means - O Rama, take our pains, sins, etc. away..
or, simply chant of Hari and Rama..

Links worth a visit -
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hari
http://www.meditationiseasy.com/mCorner/techniques/Hare_Krishna_Mantra.htm
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hare_Krishna
http://sawaal.ibibo.com/puja-and-rituals/what-meaning-hare-krishnahare-krishna-krishna-krishna-hare-hare-210996.html

Interesting. Thanks for the information.

I believe in God as well, but I don't follow any specific religion.

cyclone2k

02-12-2009, 02:33 AM

You said NEXT best writer, which probably means that I'm the BEST writer at the moment and by the time you reach my level, we'll be in 2012! :D
Nah... I wasn't talking about you.. lol.

Interesting. Thanks for the information.

I believe in God as well, but I don't follow any specific religion.
That's good.. I too just believe there's a super power sitting up there taking care of me.. :)

And, btw that's just a song, and the chants are there just as an add-on, and you shouldn't consider that as a prayer.. ;)

James

02-12-2009, 06:51 PM

Nah... I wasn't talking about you.. lol.

I see.
By the way, I'm 26, so stop referring to me as "old".......:rolleyes:

That's good.. I too just believe there's a super power sitting up there taking care of me.. :)

So do I...

You've got Indian friends who follow other religions...?

cyclone2k

02-13-2009, 12:54 AM

I see.
By the way, I'm 26, so stop referring to me as "old".......:rolleyes:
How can I trust you?? ;)
So do I...

You've got Indian friends who follow other religions...?
Yes, of course.... There are lots of friends who are Muslims, Christians, Jains, Hindus, Sikhs etc.. Differences in religion don't come as hindrance at all, we have been living together so long, that we're inseparably dissolved in our culture.. ;) And, you cannot tell by face, who follows which religion.. :) It's all cool here.. :) Almost everybody enjoys and celebrate each other's religious occasions/ festival.. Best part of it, there are lots of holidays.. I'll probably starve of holidays, if I move somewhere else.. :p

James

02-13-2009, 10:03 PM

How can I trust you?? ;)

Well, I could post my pictures/ video, but this is the Internet, so that wouldn't be a good idea......

Come and visit me one day, I'd say...;)

By the way, you're staying in a hotel my friend...! :D

Yes, of course.... There are lots of friends who are Muslims, Christians, Jains, Hindus, Sikhs etc.. Differences in religion don't come as hindrance at all, we have been living together so long, that we're inseparably dissolved in our culture.. ;) And, you cannot tell by face, who follows which religion.. :) It's all cool here.. :) Almost everybody enjoys and celebrate each other's religious occasions/ festival.. Best part of it, there are lots of holidays.. I'll probably starve of holidays, if I move somewhere else.. :p

What a great place. I think I'm moving to India!

Wait a minute, the girls are not allowed to have sex before marriage, right??

I won't survive!!

cyclone2k

02-13-2009, 11:58 PM

Well, I could post my pictures/ video, but this is the Internet, so that wouldn't be a good idea......

Come and visit me one day, I'd say...;)

By the way, you're staying in a hotel my friend...! :D
Do you think, I'm that rich to afford a hotel? :eek:

What a great place. I think I'm moving to India!

Wait a minute, the girls are not allowed to have sex before marriage, right??

I won't survive!!
Do you think Christianity/ Western World allows that, still it happens.. ;)

Oldschool

02-14-2009, 08:34 AM

Great work on the poem :)

Luke 2k9

02-14-2009, 10:30 AM

I agree with Oldschool.

cyclone2k

02-14-2009, 12:31 PM

Thanks guys ^^^ :)

James

02-15-2009, 07:45 PM

Do you think, I'm that rich to afford a hotel? :eek:

You can't even afford a two star hotel???

In that case, I HAVE TO let you stay at my house...;)

Do you think Christianity/ Western World allows that, still it happens.. ;)

Well, Christianity may not allow it, but the Western World definitely does....;)

cyclone2k

02-16-2009, 02:17 AM

You can't even afford a two star hotel???

In that case, I HAVE TO let you stay at my house...;)
After the gift episode.. yes.. :(

You're so kind old man... ;) God bless you.. :)

BTW, how much do the 2 star cost? I am fine with any hotel, which is just clean enough and doesn't stink..

Well, Christianity may not allow it, but the Western World definitely does....;)
That's the point... Pre-Marital sex happens everywhere...

James

02-16-2009, 05:47 PM

After the gift episode.. yes.. :(

You're so kind old man... ;) God bless you.. :)

BTW, how much do the 2 star cost? I am fine with any hotel, which is just clean enough and doesn't stink..

It depends my friend....

By the way, ONLY girls are allowed in my bed.

I don't want to see you and your see through underpants in my bedroom!!

That's the point... Pre-Marital sex happens everywhere...

I know all about that....;)

cyclone2k

02-17-2009, 12:46 AM

By the way, ONLY girls are allowed in my bed.

I don't want to see you and your see through underpants in my bedroom!!
Who said to you, I would stay in your bedroom.. ?? :confused:

I know all about that....;)
That's good.

James

02-17-2009, 08:18 PM

Who said to you, I would stay in your bedroom.. ?? :confused:

You can sleep in my car. :D

Just kidding, you're always welcome....

Will you be coming alone or with your family?

cyclone2k

02-18-2009, 12:02 AM

You can sleep in my car. :D
That's better coz, I don't trust you :p

Just kidding, you're always welcome....

Will you be coming alone or with your family?

Ahh.. well bro.. I don't expect a trip to Europe for atleast 5 years... maybe, when I get job and have money to spare, I can make a visit or maybe, I might land up with a job in EU.. I just wanted to have a rough idea, where the peepz of Wrestlement live, so that I could make a visit to them, whenever I visit EU.

James

02-18-2009, 06:07 PM

That's better coz, I don't trust you :p

You don't trust straight men....? :D

Ahh.. well bro.. I don't expect a trip to Europe for atleast 5 years... maybe, when I get job and have money to spare, I can make a visit or maybe, I might land up with a job in EU.. I just wanted to have a rough idea, where the peepz of Wrestlement live, so that I could make a visit to them, whenever I visit EU.

Like I said, you are more than welcome.

And I didn't know your ultimate goal was to find work in a European country.

I hope it works out for you.

And if I can help you with anything, feel free to ask....;)

cyclone2k

02-19-2009, 01:25 AM

You don't trust straight men....? :D
I don't trust gay men ^^ :p

Like I said, you are more than welcome.

And I didn't know your ultimate goal was to find work in a European country.

I hope it works out for you.

And if I can help you with anything, feel free to ask....;)

No dammit! Working in EU isn't my ultimate goal... It is just a possibility of 100 possibilities.. Just in case I get employed in EU, maybe I could be employed in US/ AUS.. who knows?

Thanks for the help though.

James

02-19-2009, 11:35 PM

I don't trust gay men ^^ :p

So, you've got no self-confidence? :D

jk

No dammit! Working in EU isn't my ultimate goal... It is just a possibility of 100 possibilities.. Just in case I get employed in EU, maybe I could be employed in US/ AUS.. who knows?

Thanks for the help though.

Hmmm...Usually when people graduate from university, they've got, what you call "100 possibilities"....

cyclone2k

02-20-2009, 02:02 AM

So, you've got no self-confidence? :D

jk
I have confidence in myself... but, not on gay people..

Hmmm...Usually when people graduate from university, they've got, what you call "100 possibilities"....
Right!

James

02-20-2009, 10:48 AM

I have confidence in myself... but, not on gay people..

^^Self-hatred can be destructive my friend...:D

jk

cyclone2k

02-20-2009, 01:09 PM

^^Self-hatred can be destructive my friend...:D

jk
Not as much as consuming 20 pegs whiskey with 12 tabs of N10 drug and smoking marijuana for 2 hours, then reading two different statements as one and posting remarks, which might be pissing off someone so much, that he might set out to find you along with a knife... :mad:

James

02-20-2009, 08:03 PM

Not as much as consuming 20 pegs whiskey with 12 tabs of N10 drug and smoking marijuana for 2 hours, then reading two different statements as one and posting remarks, which might be pissing off someone so much, that he might set out to find you along with a knife... :mad:

"YOU WANT SOME, COME GET SOME!"

:D

cyclone2k

02-21-2009, 11:59 AM

Nah... I am better in my full conscience.. :)

James

02-21-2009, 10:23 PM

Nah... I am better in my full conscience.. :)

So your boyfriend's name is "Conscience"? :D

jk!!!

cyclone2k

02-22-2009, 01:24 PM

Nah ^^^... that's your boy friend's name... it sounds like an English name.. ;)

James

02-22-2009, 05:15 PM

Nah ^^^... that's your boy friend's name... it sounds like an English name.. ;)

So?

I hear you like to experiment with men from different cultures...! :D

jk

cyclone2k

02-23-2009, 04:52 AM

So?

I hear you like to experiment with men from different cultures...! :D

jk

You've heard wrong.. and btw, I have heard that you don't like experimenting with men from different cultures, and prefer men who are Made in England...

So, most likely it's your boyfriend's name.. :p

*serious*

James

02-23-2009, 07:17 PM

You've heard wrong.. and btw, I have heard that you don't like experimenting with men from different cultures, and prefer men who are Made in England...

So, most likely it's your boyfriend's name.. :p

*serious*

You and your husband share the weirdest stories...:rolleyes:

Why do you guys involve me in your foreplay??!!

Leave me alone!

:D

jk